Of course! Here's a shorter version:
"My stay at Signature Apartments was safe and enjoyable, but service had some issues. A receptionist was rude to my visitor, and twice I was moved to different locations despite booking Signature. At Solaris Apartments, my stay was excellent, but security in was concerning—my visitor had items stolen, leading to a police case. While the police handled it well, the property's response lacked urgency, and some security staff were unprepared for such incidents. Overall, good stay, but customer service and security need improvement."
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